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Unit 1 Peer Review

Unit 1 Peer Review

Q GUIDELINES FOR PEER REVIEW (Unit 1) Email your drafts to your peer-review partner, and provide him or her with substantive feedback. Answer all the questions below in a summarized paragraph form and using a memo format (see Files folder for model document) Combine your feedback for each letter into one document. Once completed, email your partner a copy of your peer review and submit another copy in this folder. Letter # 1 • Is the letter properly formatted (full-block style)? • Is the letter properly structured (positive message)? • What are the strong points of the letter? • What are the weak elements of the letter? How can this be improved? • Does the writer appropriately target the intended audience (the supervisor)? • Is the letter concise and specific? • Is the letter persuasive? If you were the writer's supervisor, would you approve this request? Justify your answer. • Is the budget clearly and accurately presented? Letter # 2 • Is the letter properly formatted (modified-block style)? • Is the letter properly structured (negative message)? • Is the tone tactful? • What are the strong points of the letter? • What are the weak elements of the letter? How can this be improved? • Does the writer appropriately identify the problem or faulty items? • Does the writer include relevant information? (Dates, part numbers, etc.) • Does the writer explain logically what went wrong without speculating about the problem? • Does the writer clearly state what s/he expect the reader to do to solve the problem? • Is the letter persuasive?

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To: Pedro Dominguez From: Willie Crawford Date: 3rd February, 2022 Subject: Peer Review of Letter 1 and 2 The letter is formatted properly with full block style. The positive message of the letter is properly constructed. The strong points of the letter are the writing style and mechanics. Pedro, you have used concise and concrete words to describe each item mentioned in the list. The weak elements are not much identified but I will suggest you to go through the letter loud so that you can understand the silly errors on the letter. The writer has addressed the audience in an appropriate manner. The letter is concise and specific. Writer has persuaded the audience in an appropriate manner. The budget is clearly and accurately presented in the letter.