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Week 6 Topic 2 Discussion

Week 6 Topic 2 Discussion

Q In this discussion, you will share a draft of one of your body paragraphs. You will also give and receive feedback from your classmates. Initial Post (due by 11:59 p.m. on Friday) Post a draft of one of your body paragraphs. Be sure that your body paragraph includes a clear point that is supported by appropriate details, along with information and ideas from the course readings. Don't forget to engage with a source in your paragraph. Refer to the sub-module on Writing Your Body Paragraphs for tips and sample body paragraphs. Also be sure to demonstrate pronoun-antecedent agreement and the grammar skills covered in previous weeks in your writing. Peer Responses (first peer response due by 11:59 p.m. on Sunday; second peer response due by 11:59 p.m. on Tuesday) Respond to your classmates and provide feedback on their body paragraphs. Here are a few things you might consider when writing your responses • Does the paragraph include a clear point? Suggest possible revisions to make the point more clear. • Does the paragraph include appropriate details that support the main point? Suggest possible revisions to improve the supporting details. • Does the paragraph include support from sources that are properly cited? Suggest possible revisions to improve the use of sources and citations. • What other insight or suggestions might you offer your classmate regarding their body paragraph?

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Topic: Language and Communication. Thesis: Language and communication skills are at the top of the priority list because human relationships, both personal and professional, are largely dependent on it. Body Paragraph 1 It is through communications that shared interests and concerns are exchanged. Humans are complicated animals and they have critical thinking power but those are of no use if they cannot convey their thoughts to anyone else. Anyone who has proper communication skills can initiate further discussion and new concerns can be discussed that way. Also, use of appropriate languages often leads to development of shared interest.