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Voyage Story draft 1

Voyage Story draft 1

Q Submit your Voyage Story Draft One here By the end of Week 2, Sunday, 11:59PM US Eastern Time, post two pages of double-spaced writing that clearly attempts to tell a story of a personal experience. By the end of Week 3, Sunday, 11:59PM US Eastern Time, review two posts with two paragraphs each, written in complete sentences that capture some strong components and some points of confusion or possible improvement for two different Essay One drafts.

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February 3rd, 2021-02-05 Essay 1 – Voyage Story First draft The House by the River The house by the river has always interested me, and the garden surrounding it always fascinated me. Somehow it always reminded me of Miss Havisham’s house in Great Expectations by Charles Dickens. The house had learnt to sing and lean into the sunlight with the sky, to let the birdsong resonate inside and enjoy the quenching rain beat. It seemed, as if it had selected isolation for itself, the empty house